All Comments on 'Aberrant Pt. 04'

by DragonCobolt

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DragonCobolt over 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading!

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Pokingdemon about 4 years ago

Two stars

Your erotica is strong. Story content is solid. Your execution is weak. I understand that this was (tabletop game?) dialogue that was scripted. I think you could have done better. Also dont like that the story a year later the story is unfinished.

DragonCobolt about 4 years agoAuthor

Yeah, there's a reason why this story is unfinished: The group I ran with isn't...around anymore. Like, I can't finish it. Sorry, but thems the breaks and it's also why I don't do this kind of story anymore!