All Comments on 'Abigail Lincoln'

comfortable to read, arousing and pleasant. A lovely effort. "5."

In my opinion your story is a '6.5'. Of course Literotica would not let my post that as a score so you'll just have to know your story was A VERY GOOD read...

Great detail, nice story line. The rape thing was a real turn off. Rape isn't sexual, it isn't fun. It's a horrible occurrence. This story helps to glorify the idea of rape and twists it into something that it isn't.

i found the story quite erotic and the pace was very nice. however, there was a MAJOR distraction in the middle of the story. did you somehow forget the character's names? one second, it was jimmy and michael, the next it was bryan and william. what the hell? then it happened again the following page and even happened mid-sentence, mixing names and then going back. finally, a page or two later, jerry knocked on her hotel door. who the hell is jerry? these major mistakes could have been corrected by simply taking a few minutes to re-read and edit. it was enough of a distraction that i couldn't give it 5 stars. an otherwise superb story was diminished by pretty big oversights.