All Comments on 'Abigail's Party'

Just Wow! Love it.

The ending when the daughter said Mother, you dirty whore, That's my husbands cock in your mouth....

a real wife would have been pissed about the husband's comments before mentioning her mom sucking the husband's dick

"This story and 'Muriel's Wedding' are wholly independent,"

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Uh, what 'Muriel's Wedding'? I looked at your story list, and there's no such story listed.

Ditto! 'Muriel's Wedding' is not on your story list. I have the idea that the daughter set up the scene with her husband in advance, but then what do I know. Keep writing.

Great story. The roles of power and subservience were well written and the sex was hot. Loved the ending too.

It was a mess. Bad writing and terrible grammar.

There was no need to call her names especially if he wanted to fuck her again.

It was more akin to rape than incest.

'Carol spread my gown' What does that mean? Were you wearing a gown when you wrote it. Carol spread her gown. Slow down and read what you have written then edit it.

Learn basic grammar. You're not your.

I found Murials wedding, both great stories, please ignore the pedantic clowns and do follow ups. Those who can write do and those who can't criticize.