All Comments on 'Ableside Manor Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wrong category

"Coupling" involves two people. Sex involving three or more is groip sex. Also, it was distracting when you started nearly every paragraph with a character's name.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
I enjoyrd that

The critics prior to me must have not gotten any in a long time, I enjoyed the portrayal of the household staff and the casual nature regarding sex. I'd read more if you'd be wiling to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Liked it

Neat enough story, tho the words used by the characters are more todays speech styles than middle-ages England.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Best erotic story I have read in a very long time!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story!

I loved this story - the characters are so realistic.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

maddictmaddictover 5 years ago
Your Lordship

A open invitation, I'm always thrilled when she spreads her legs, for me. I know you know, if a boy has a hair trigger ladies its up to you to trip his trigger. We then can better service your needs in less time than it feels like for you. Holding him off as you well know leads to your own dissatisfaction.

I thought girls masturbate together, late at night, when their needs out weigh the good girls dont fantasy. Is this why girls brush their hair a hundred stokes every night, anyone do it with less ? Ladies any comments about this `*~*`

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