All Comments on 'Ablution'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Interesting story of two people coming together.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 8 years ago
very good

I thought this was a good story showing that even priests need love too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well Written....

......solid effort, a nice story told with a sense of humor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Unbelievable. And Disgusting

older woman is apparently unattractive. Why is younger woman remotely interested. Yuk!

rml65rml65almost 8 years ago
Wonderful story!

People tend to never see there own beauty! I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent!

Incredibly good writing about a budding May-December affair.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful!!

GREAT STORY--MORE OF THIS PLEASE!!

As a lesbian married to a wonderful butch woman, I LOVE THIS! This story was so perfect!

You reminded me of my love, my wife. And you reminded me of that perfect feeling I had (and still have) when we make love or kiss or just spend time together.

Thank You for sharing this <3

mab4664mab4664almost 8 years ago

I totally enjoyed this story. There are just so many different aspects to this story that are appealing to me: age difference, clergy involvement, passion, tenderness, cuddling and most of all encouragement by the young woman to her priest to relax and let love find her.

Gwanji16Gwanji16almost 8 years ago
Amazing

An amazing, lovely story! One of the best I have read here.

Randee1958Randee1958almost 8 years ago
Moved Me

They're was not one part of this emotional work of art that didn't in form or another move me. Not only was it uplifting. It made me feel how energized Mother Leah knew she loved Julie. How beautiful is that. 5 blinding 🌟😍😎

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Simply wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Very well written.. Great job with the characters. I was a little skeptical when I first started to read this, but I was really surprised how this story grabbed me. Now I can't wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
They should get married.

They should get married. Julie should take Leah's name and get pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Lovely!

This was a truly beautiful love story and I send a very special thanks to the author for sharing. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Aimie2469Aimie2469almost 8 years ago
So close to home

I loved it, every word!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 8 years ago

Once I got past the first 4 paragraphs with all the religious words and phrasing, it was a wonderful read. I'm interested to see where this is heading and I'm looking forward to the next story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I love the story line. More plese

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful

Thank you so much for sharing this, such a beautiful story, it's so perfect and just brings a lot of memories it actually made me cry

MaonaighMaonaighalmost 8 years ago
A perfect definition

Early on, this story struck a chord with me. My late wife always called weak coffee "Church Hall coffee" (the result of years of work as a local newspaper reporter covering, inter alia, various church functions). This excellent little story had much to offer. I smiled at the image of accidentally dialling God while in the throes of passion. And when, after her first real orgasm, Leah described herself as feeling "Whole", I thought this the absolutely perfect definition. A five-star tale. Keep on writing, C_M, I think you will have a lot of offer us.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Great story!

This was a very nice, well written story. Thank you so much for sharing!

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago

Praying for more..

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 4 years ago
Beautiful awakening

This was a beautiful story of an awakening love. Thank you.

metroalmametroalmaover 3 years ago

That sex should be the fulfillment of the Liturgy is just so Episcopal. Union with other and God, a universal orgasm. One must probably need be a special kind of religious geek to get it - Loved it! Despite the Canons and ethics all that there comes a time when all the rules must surrender to the Divine.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Beautiful, sweet story.

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