by UnexpectedVixen
Writing is an art. Very few writers can pull off what you have done.
You weave a picture in the reader's mind through your words.
Keep writing.
This story-adventure kept me tuned in and awaiting the turn of events that escaped my expectations. Please continue with your work.
The coffee comment went well with the humor of the narration. Your writing style is fun and easy to read. Nice job!
Very well done. Short, sweet, good characters. I'll be reading the rest of your stories.
Its wonderful. Writing is an artform, you proved it with this story.
Wit, intelligence, skill AND humour! Very, very impressed. Please, continue writing more....
Tsk tsk...don't worry about the coffee...I'm sure readers shouldn't worry about historical accuracy in a story involving dragons and wizards. I very much enjoyed your story and thought it was humorous and touching by turns. I only wish it was longer. I would love to see a revised version of this with more character development. It would be fantastic.
Best Wishes
Anstice
Unexpected Vixen - Very nice! Loved the story. The humor was terrific and came across very clearly. Nicely done! Please write more.
I found this story a true pleasure to read and edit. Easily one of the best!
Although I come to Literotica to read about sex, I'd much rather find a well-written story with little or no sex than a poorly-written page of mindless rutting.
Thanks for this one.
... but fun. Thanks for an enjoyable ahistorical tale.
historic accuracy should never be of major concern in a good tale in a fantasy setting that being said this was a very interesting tale i am looking forward to your next offering
I really enjoyed it. You should be writing novels or screen plays. Very very e.notable story.