All Comments on 'About Last Knight...'

by UnexpectedVixen

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Very Entertaining

Short and sweet. Like this comment.

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 9 years ago
Fangs for the memories

A fun little piece. Very enjoyable. Delightful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OH YEAH

not at all what I expected. very good story too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good work

Writing is an art. Very few writers can pull off what you have done.

You weave a picture in the reader's mind through your words.

Keep writing.

drmrbludrmrblualmost 12 years ago
Delightful entertainment

This story-adventure kept me tuned in and awaiting the turn of events that escaped my expectations. Please continue with your work.

LaSaliaLaSaliaalmost 12 years ago
Funny :-)

The coffee comment went well with the humor of the narration. Your writing style is fun and easy to read. Nice job!

RomanceLivesRomanceLivesabout 12 years ago

Very well done. Short, sweet, good characters. I'll be reading the rest of your stories.

Blackman1Blackman1over 12 years ago
Amazing

Its wonderful. Writing is an artform, you proved it with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What a very pleasant surprise!

Wit, intelligence, skill AND humour! Very, very impressed. Please, continue writing more....

AnsticeAnsticeover 12 years ago
Short and Amusing...

Tsk tsk...don't worry about the coffee...I'm sure readers shouldn't worry about historical accuracy in a story involving dragons and wizards. I very much enjoyed your story and thought it was humorous and touching by turns. I only wish it was longer. I would love to see a revised version of this with more character development. It would be fantastic.

Best Wishes

Anstice

persephone9906persephone9906over 12 years ago
What A Gread Read!

Unexpected Vixen - Very nice! Loved the story. The humor was terrific and came across very clearly. Nicely done! Please write more.

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGover 12 years ago
good read

but was really hoping for some knight on dragon sex!

DragonSlayer_OKDragonSlayer_OKover 12 years ago
Near Perfection....

I found this story a true pleasure to read and edit. Easily one of the best!

HeadguyHeadguyover 12 years ago
I agree with searchingforperfection...

Completely!

crazycujocrazycujoover 12 years ago
good story

well written with a good story line....thanks...

searchingforperfectionsearchingforperfectionover 12 years ago
Loved it!

Although I come to Literotica to read about sex, I'd much rather find a well-written story with little or no sex than a poorly-written page of mindless rutting.

Thanks for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good work :)

have to love happy endings heh

roseNthornsroseNthornsover 12 years ago
Nice!

A fun story, I enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Vely scaly stoly ...

... but fun. Thanks for an enjoyable ahistorical tale.

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
great story

historic accuracy should never be of major concern in a good tale in a fantasy setting that being said this was a very interesting tale i am looking forward to your next offering

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fantastic story!

I really enjoyed it. You should be writing novels or screen plays. Very very e.notable story.

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