All Comments on 'About That Kiss'

I think the jump to them kissing is him remembering their past hook up

This story you are reading now, is the one I submitted to the Nude Day Contest. Thanks to all of you who noticed that the wrong story was accidentally submitted. I hope you enjoy this !

Thanks, and so much better than the one-page mistake you apparently posted originally! Best wishes for the Nude Day 2022 Contest!

Really nice and very romantic! Thanks

Hi, S&F, so glad Laurel was able to get this story corrected to the right version for you. It’s well written, sweet, romantic, and really sexy, too. You gave a few good hints as to where it was going, but you also did a really nice job in getting there. 5* and best wishes in the contest.

Gosh, you do write good romance Smutty. So only a five will do!

5 stars for this baby, love the romance

Fascinating, incredibly fun story that kept my eyes glued to every page.

Really enjoyed the out in the woods camper scenario.

Love the way your stories always grab the reader's attention with lots of twists and turns

and meaningful dialog.

Liked this ND entry the best.

Good luck, and keeep on writing wonderfully entertaining stories!

Cheers.

Loved this romance tale ! Keep the good work ! 5 stars

Another wonderful story! Five stars for sure!

Very enjoyable from start to finish - lots of twists 'n turns with some expected results and others surprising. Great job, Author!

A delightful story that I really enjoyed. Will message you separately with a few thoughts.

Loved it. The build up of their romance was very nice, and I'm glad for a happy ending every now and then. Him being other than poor was pretty well telegraphed, but honestly, I expect a little bit of that in this type of story. Other than some mysteriously missing words (a lot of "I's" for some reason, shrug) throughout, this was a great read. Thanks smutty, until the next one!

Rnebular

Such a cute story and obviously a 5. Just 13 previous comments?

Readers: This is a hidden gem.

Awesome story, great build up!

Such a delightful romp with enjoyable characters, plot, and pacing. I love the romance--keep writing, please! 5*

Glad you enjoyed this one. Your comments are so kind, I think I might just keep writing.

Cannot score this a 5 because the ending was poorly written. After over 4 pages of them fucking, to find an end squeezed into less than a chapter and poorly written, really spoiled the story.

Lovely story, loved the romantic scenes

I love these two but then I like all your stuff thanks

I loved the story. The ending was a little short but ok.