All Comments on 'Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder Ch. 03'

by DizzySteinway

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Quite well-written and the first part was interesting. After that it was a bit Hallmark. Her reputation as a sensible, independent professional with good judgement is going to take a nasty knock when her colleagues discover what she is doing. It's less and less acceptable these days; too great a risk of drama affecting the team when they fall out. Responsible individuals know that they can control who they let themselves fall in love with.

Griffin_ScoutGriffin_Scoutover 2 years ago

You definitely need to continue this story. Anon, if you want reality go look outside. I will take Hallmark any day of the week. Sometimes we all need a little happiness in our lives.

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