by GymTeacherYouDeserve
I really appreciated the concept of Grace and Brofie's special bond transcending death. It provided a satisfyingly joyous resolution to the tragedy of Grace's untimely passing, and Brodie's mourning.
I happen to be a believer in the afterlife being a timeless lucid dream world inhabited by the special people in a persons life, If there was someone in your life that was your "everything", then it's very plausible that they would manifest as a permanent companion in a persons lucid dream afterlife. It isn't a far stretch when you consider that a person usually has a main object of love and desire in their normal dreams.
Five stars for a beautifully thought provoking narrative.
This is by far your best story yet. Thank you for writing it. I enjoyed it immensely.
A magnificent story! So much love, and positivity. To say nothing of the superb writing style and the beautifully-written sex.
I found the story rather intriguing while at the same time confusing. 5 star from me. Original and erotic. You manage to create a really dreamlike state. It challenged me intellectually while simultaneously getting me aroused. Thanks!