All Comments on 'Absolution Ch. 03'

Now that they have been reunited and her father has been taken out, what next? They still have both their children to try and get. And what of a new leader, will Khar be the new leader since he's the closest relative?

Just post the next chapter, and hurry w/it. hehe-he

but the dialect is distracting. I would have been happier with a description of the dialect and then having it written normally. Readers are capable of hearing a dialect even when it isn't written. Having it all spelled out for me makes it harder to read and stops me from getting into the story.

I would also like to hear more about Adia and Jolen's past... why he left her, why she didn't come after him, etc.

Thanks for writing.

You do not seem to be aware that there are a lot of readers whose native language is not English. Using dialect is an uncaring way of you as an author towards all of these readers. Besides that I thought reading a romantic Non-human story not a bloody and cruel one. No stars here.