by Kisput
I don't care what anyone says. This story is great. I love it. I've noticed a lot of people complaining about the lack of story but I feel like it's an implication that only someone who feels as strongly about their best friend that Al and Andy do will get. Keep writing.
mmmmmm lost intrest almost into the first chapter. i aint saying its bad, just not my taste....best wishes
2nd comment is there is 10 chapters that i think you could have got into 4 ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????