All Comments on 'Acceptance in Student's Arms'

Good First Story

Very well done. A few glitches but great story.

Yes, there are a few minor complaints (spelling errors, or possibly wrong word used), but it's a really good story. I hope you will continue to share your talent with us. This was very enjoyable.

Let Katherine and Jeff continue their "connections," and maybe offer more descriptions -- especially as Jeff matures. Maybe he can develop a bit of sexy chest hair across his upper chest, around his pecs, maybe a light treasure trail. It seems Katherine would be very excited to see that sexual characteristic, and maybe even taste his body hair!

Pretty good, could use some editing

Please continue this. There arnt enough bbw stories and there should be more like this!!

As a first story it was not a bad plot and had good characters... but you really need an editor for your next attempt. Also try rereading what you have written in the light of a new day...you would have seen a lot of your errors yourself. Don't give up !

Waiting for part 2

FANTASTIC STORY!!!!! Well done!!!

Overall, I liked the story. I suspect the author has trouble with personal pronouns (him, her, his), which may reveal that the author does not use English as a first language. And, some of the conversation for the boy seemed too mature and educated for his age. The idea of a student and teacher enjoying and pleasuring each other is very erotic.