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by KeithD

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Smith79Smith79over 2 years ago

Omg what a great story! Entertained and hard as a rock.. Please give me more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The transitions from one scene to another are well crafted. The maintenance of voice - one of the hardest things in writing is well done. The succinct capturing of the emotions and dynamics of the various interactions and changing of scenes do not leave the reader wondering "what just happened?" Richard from Seattle

LingeringAfterthoughtLingeringAfterthoughtover 2 years ago

Wandered into a different neighborhood with this one... loved it. Well written, and so much heart. Plus, all these hot guys in the ads? I gotta read more of this stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another great story from sr71plt/KeithD. Loved the gradual revealing of the affair with the captain and the build-up with Frank. Of course the sex on the train and in the bar were stimulating. Surprise ending leading to probable HEA. Good job. Curious Pete

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08about 2 years ago

would love to hear more of him and Frank

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For the information of the GM reader, KeithD is the new account name for stories (many of which are published to the marketplace under the names habu and Dirk Hessian) that were previously posted to Literotica under the name sr71plt. The sr71plt account had a goal of 1,001 pos...