All Comments on 'Accident Grants Benefit Ch. 01'

Great job. You are the very best writer here!

Sparkles in my eyes and a big smile LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

Writing style is kinda hard to follow. Feels like it is missing transitions and was written with a lot of omitted details. It's a OK setup, but the difficulty in getting into the story is a bit of a turnoff.

Hey, femadorer,

this is one fingering, romantic story, just as I like them, and I can't wait for the next chapters.

Good effort - great for a newcomer.

If this is a true story like you affirmed, you've certainly been blessed, thank you for sharing.

Good job. It's nice to read a story that has that much very realistic love and excitement in it. The detailed depiction makes it even better.

Thanks, and remember to continue!

A heart rending (fairy?)tale of friendship and committing, honesty and trust. You gave me back hope that life can be good.

A romantic tale, written with love for fine details and a great sense of humor the story is touching, and if you keep the high standard you will hit a home, what a debut!

Thank you