All Comments on 'Accidental Delivery Ch. 01'

chapter 2 but nothing to follow? that is real torture missy ;-)

i just hope we don't have to wait too long for the second chapter, i suspect these two are in for a nice hot ride.

to read the response - very nice work

Pretty priceless start! I can almost feel the heat from Marie's cheeks as she realised she sent the wrong file! Thankfully, I don't have to wait for chapter 2. Off to find out what Nick's response was :-)

I like the whole concept of the missent file possibly leading to the fullfilment of both their unspoken disires. I am curious to see where this goes.