All Comments on 'Accidental Fuck with Mum Ch. 01'

Would like to hear one about the cousin and then the mother and cousin all three

For the read.

great start to what could be a very hot n sexy romp with Mummy. She seems to like how things happened and wants more. They could keep doing each other and even make a baby. Please keep going. I saw nothing wrong at all with grammar and spelling that detracted from your story.

"Fancy another Fuck Terry" was a beautiful ending. Please keep writing.

Don't know why you seem worried about editing, it was all pretty good. I thoroughly enjoyed the Britishness of the story and having been that drunk myself the "accident" seemed quite plausible to me!

I absolutely loved the casual kick of poor Jerry (I presume it was he) lying in a pool of puke followed by "He seems ok" when the poor guy groaned. Opem a window to let the stink out then back upstairs for a non accidental fuck.

Worth a 5, do more.

The only 2 things I didn't like about this was firstly you say it was a 40 mile drive to the nearest club, then you say curtains keep out the big city lights... a city with no clubs lol? And the other thing is when on the 2 characters were talking neither of them recognized the others voice?

Other than that it was a good read. :)

Be nice see him knock up his mom after her period

Hope you been fucking your mom every day to point you knocked her up with your kid inside her me knocked up my mom aunt and two sisters in same week.the four of them are couple days apart to deliver the kids in them

NO ONE,CAN GET THAT DRUNK.

SHE LEFT HER DATE, AT THE BOTTOM

OF THE STEPS COVERED IN VOMIT.

WENT UP AND FUCKED HER SON, SHE

FOUND OUT THE NEXT MORNING.

Guys in comments; have you really knocked up your moms aunts sisters and grannies

The title kind of clued us in to the surprise. I liked it.

Thanks for sharing.

Loved the story got me wet. Also love the Please no comments about editing unless you are offering. I turned off my comments because of this and the dictionary police lol.