by Sawj
Great story, I love the set up, but I would like to know what Colette relation to the narrator seeing her show
I think it will be linked in with next story. Thank you very much for positive feedback so far :)
Stupid.
The names are given...clearly. go with it You're not GUESSING that one is Michael, he IS Michael.
Go with it and don't try to be cute or coy. Unnecessary additional extra excessive useless uncalled for verbiage doesn't help the story.
I have had strong voyeur tendences since forever.
:-)