by swdave14
This is a good little story. It could easily be a longer series of similar illicit adventures. I particularly enjoy hearing a character's thoughts & feelings, so I enjoyed this story. Some of his were kind of muted, but came across well to me as shock. I'd have liked to hear more of his emotional reaction during & after the anal scene (how he felt about liking parts while hating parts of it or being terrified of what might come next). Then again, I don't have the stones to write erotica, and I really appreciate the fact that you wrote this. Really well done. Thanks.