by Saula88
Please don't tell me that's the end of this tale, it has so much promise! I hope there's further chapters to be explored, as and when the father returns to his overseas assignment and mom and son enjoy some time together!
Either way, still a good story.
Beautifully written as it is not overbearing and very realistic. Any honest man of his age would admit such pictures of his mother were attractive.
I gave this high marks only in hope and anticipation that there will be more, because this ended with an opening for more. Please don't disappoint me (us).
I think I see where this story line is going and I love it. And, just maybe it will be a 3-way.
In my imagination a three some is already taking place! Should you choose to write such a thing, I would very much enjoy reading it, if not well it is still a good story!
I read this all in my most English accent in my head. So witty and your wording issuperb. It was like a sexy comedy but with no sex.
I hope there is a part 2. This is a well written story that doesn’t
Follow the familiar “Mom is 50 but looks like she’s 16 with impossibly big tits ...
“ format. Keep it going, please!
Excellent visuals. A fun read. But a few more hints of what might come would have put it over the top. Well worth my time.
this started well, and built up a good plot. but it was too clinical. and wayyy too short.. i am not critizising to be rude, but it felt as if the story was written by a computer program.. it was cold and had no warmth in it.
There is no sex in this story. It's a nice change from the usual formulaic bruising, heroic sex accounts of superhuman well-oiled sex machines. Beneath its breezy, chirpy, sharp mom-son, and then wife-husband banter, there is simmering frisson tension. Excellent author who fans your inner embers with class. This is a new author. Looking forward to more...
Next time stick it into non erotic. This contained zilch incest or taboo. Perhaps if she purposely sent naked pics to son it would sneak into incest.
Otherwose fairly well written, and a good idea for a story. Have done the autocorrect problem myself, luckily no naughty photos.
The people who are complaining that this isn't incest or taboo are idiots. THis is about family intimacy, adjacent to sex- which is very much taboo. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Great story! Wish my mom had sent me pictures like that when I was younger. It was a turn on for me.
I just love the intelligent realism by a writer that is aware. What can be more sexy than awareness of the forces flowing between humans. I'm grateful that you have begun to publish on this site.
I have been reading & following stories on this site for the longest time. This is one of the best stories I have read here. What is astounding is that there is no sex. Zilch. I love the writing style. It deals with human nature in a sensitive & intelligent way. The style is breezy, concise, sharp & witty. And yet the frisson is palpable, always simmering, but never overpowering. This writer has received some harsh feedback on there being no sex. My advice to the writer is to ignore these, If readers wish to read wham bang noisy sex, there are thousands others to choose from, so what’s the problem. Saula88, you are a breath of fresh air.
Very Good. I like stories that are realistic and this had it in spades.
This story is exactly in the correct category. I sincerely hope you are working on chapter two. The only rating I could possibly give this story is 5 stars. I rarely comment. After sending this message I’m going to read all your other stories. I tried to send this as a flesh and blood member, but it has been so long since I logged in that I’ve forgotten my password. Please keep writing.
Altho no sex, I love the easy flowing chat-style narrative form. Keep it up.
One of the best stories I have read on Literotica, and perversely, no sex. This story sets me thinking of sending some naughty pix to my twenties son accidentally on purpose to test his reaction. My son has always volunteered comments on my body and gym efforts, sometimes in the presence of his dad. This will raise it a notch up the next level.
This story was like a cake without the
frosting. Most people still eat the cake.
It was well written,funny at times, so
who cares about frosting. This was a
good story.
..THANK YOU..
Please tell me there is more. A sexy story.
5 stars for a breezy teasing sexy conversational-style story. Realistic too. Goes to show that you dont need monster dicks & pumping sex triathletes to make a good cum-inducing story. Enjoyed this story.
I forwarded this story to my mom teasing “so mom, what do you think?”. Let me just say here that I received a satisfactory reply, & I’m still admiring the reply.
So, thank you Saula!
Never thot I will say this in literotica.
Story has no sex, but cum inducing. My hubby testifies to that.
So what if there's no sex in the story, there's the implication. It was well handled, and still erotic, and importantly, there's plenty of room for the story to expand, as I'm sure it will do so. Good story, well done!
A well written sexy story, without the actual sex. I enjoyed it very much. But I do love a good tease story. And now I wonder what mom was thinking as she stared at son's "cock sock" with husband there watching her. Well done.
What a lovely teasing sexy story, even though no sex. So refreshing to read something different like this on heavy action literotica. You inspired me to accidentally-on-purpose email some bold pix to my son who is on assignment overseas. His reaction was delightful. Thank you, thank you! Chapter 2 please?
Nice story. I'm sure there's bunch of people that did the same thing or left pictures on open computers, etc.
It could happen. I have a lot of photos on my computer that could accidentily get sent to the wrong someone.
Well done. Just as advertised, the story creates the picture for the reader and does it in a very personable manner. I believe that the range of readers includes those who just need the basic sex description to obtain fulfillment and those at the other end of the spectrum who employ their brain in the construction of charcters whith emotions and thereby share some of the emotion and stimulation of the characters of the story. The latter requires an author who writes for the reader instead of a writer who describes events.
- So by my estimation, this is a sexy start to an erotic story.
Me: Mum, do you think we can do some skinny dipping when everyone is asleep tonight?
Nicely presented. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
We want a sequel to the story, showcasing how the pool trip went at the house, please.