All Comments on 'Accidents and Revelations'

By “The end,” surely you mean “the end of chapter 1.” Your writing and story are easily good enough to be a book or screenplay. Sarah has only begun her journey and you’ve set it up really nicely.

Brilliant erotic writing. Descriptive and sensual and tantalising. I think I need to go walking near your tree one evening...ha ha XXX

5 Stars! That is one of the best stories I have read on here! I love how you explored Sarah's evolving sexuality. And to echo the other two commenters....it was truly an erotic yet sensual read. And I hope you consider at least a sequel.

Great erotic writing...So well structured and paced. I think this might be my favourite from all your stories 🙂

An wonderfully erotic read! 5 Stars!

You tell a good story, one that excitingly develops and explores the thoughts and feelings of a young woman discovering her previously-repressed sexuality.

However, you ruined it for me with the apalling punctuation: you really, really need to learn where to correctly use commas and full stops.

M

So enjoyed your writing and the exploration of Sarah’s desires. Erotic and absorbing.

This is the second time I've read this story, and, just like the first, it has left me wanting more. Superb!

I know just how Sarah feels. I've done a few things like it and it gives such a thrill.

It reminds me of my wife telling me about the affair she had with another woman. She loves heterosexual sex, but for a while, she couldn’t get enough of another woman she met shopping. This story describes it just like she did to me.

Lovely story. Lingerie stores and it's employees.... hmmmm brings back memories (see my own story).

Well written and an absolute five stars!!

I love being seen. Short skirt and a thong on a staircase, or even going panty-less. My girlfriend has 'accidentally' held open the changing cubicle curtain when I have been trying on a swimsuit or lingerie and a man walks past - displaying my nakedness. So hot!

We do frig ourselves on the bus or masturbate in the park, with the thrill of possibly getting caught.

I don't do it at work though, well, not very often.

Lexi