All Comments on 'Accidents Happen'

Good story but who wants their first time to be with some stranger at a sex party.

Fantastic hot sexy story. I hope there is more to come now these two have had some experience together. Maybe they get together as often as they can or even move in with each other and make babies.

HOT!! I wish my sister and I could have that kind of experience. And my stepdaughter too!!

Can't what for the sequel

Another idiot author that hasn't a clue about female anatomy!

it was good need to keep it going though as in what happens next

Pregnancy?

Loved the ending. Approaching sweetness. I’m not sure where you’re heading, but think about continuing.

It’s a very good story as is, but you write well enough to do a great job whatever you decide.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

Tc

Incredible! I assumed they'd finish and find out after - so much better to find out and finish anyway. Thank you. Waiting to find out what happens at his place. If you do a sequel connect it in some way to this one, I won't want to miss it.

totally hot! "Please Sir I want some more!"

Clue - a girl's hymen is located near the entrance of her pussy, not deep inside.

First and foremost, I don't know why people give tired plotted stories anything more than a 1 star, unless this is the first story they've read on this site or missed the few dozen posted so far this year with the same premise as this story.

Think of something new. If you can't, then put a disclaimer at the beginning that you know it's a tired plot, but you're incapable of coming up with your own. Please.

That her match would be her brother was easy. The desire within the writing built beautifully with an epitome of sexual crescendo.

Worry not of Anonymous' LOL comment. Apparently that reader is too fixated on what they think they know than about enjoying a good read.

Give Alex a bit of sexy dark chest hair for his little sister to taste and caress!

I thought it was great many a great time I had fucking my brothers incest is a fantastic feeling

I been fucking both my brothers and my dad for over 4 years

Great story. Believable setup. Hot sex. All the makings of a good incest story.

Carnegeon -

After reading some of the anonymous comments I felt I need to leave one in support of a fellow author. A story doesn’t need to have a unique plot to be good. It needs to be well written with interesting characters in believable situations. Oh, and the sex needs to be hot too!

In my opinion, your story ticked all of those boxes.

Don’t take any feedback to heart where the commenter is too chicken to attribute it to their account name.

Keep writing.

UAlbanyGirl, unless something funky is going on with the site, my comment about the overused plot line is attributed to my name, and from what I see my comment is the only one commenting on the lack of creativity with the plot.

Even it were anonymous however, your argument that anonymous comments shouldn't be taken seriously is an illogical argument. The fact that a story uses someone else's plot and is therefore a boring story is still true, whether signed by the commenter or anonymous.

Great story well told..... Yes this plot is used alot but its nobody's business to bring those into a new story I give this story a 5 but I do suggest you read up on your female anatomy because yes the cherry is located very close to the front of the vaginal tract as its there to protect that opening from infection..... Now do write a sequel to this its very good and to be honest this story could have benefited from being slightly longer

I simply loved the story and the plot, I don't get all twisted up in the negative comments I just read the stories and take them for what there are, creative imaginative and sometimes true entertainment. well done. keep writing.

I want to ditto mark everything that HDblackheart said. There's definitely more to add to this story. Please consider continuing with a Part 2

please continue

My 2 cents

MORE PLEASE!! Thanks for your time and your imagination.

another dumb author that has no idea of female anatomy!

Hymens are just short distance beyond the introitus...not deep inside...just saying. Otherwise a fun wee yarn.

Loved it

The author is not stupid.

He just didn't study anatomy. And he's never fucked a virgin.

The characters are deaf and blind.

Loved it. Hope we see what happens back at Alex's place

Other readers have pointed out the two glaring mistakes in this story so I’ll say no more, but other than that, not a bad storyline overall.. I feel you need to continue on with this there’s so much more you can add to this story…

Please complete another chapter of this story! I love ❤️ it!

Verty good, whens chapter2?

Please write a sequel to this, would love to read about her getting pregnant