All Comments on 'Acolyte of the Pleasure Goddess Ch. 04'

You got really good writting chops, not only can you write good erotica, you can also make an interesting battle scene with stakes. Also interesting touch to have the Manticore comment on the characters themselves, give hints of their personalities and what kind of people they are. Poor Vael looks like someone full of regrets, and i do hope Delyssa gets to help him feel better by the end. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Brilliant! Love the deepening complexities between them, and you wrote the fight beautifully

I much enjoy this well-written story. Thanks for sharing!