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All Comments on 'Across Black Seas of Infinity Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Another great chapter

Loving the story so far. Just wanted to take a moment to point out a spelling error that you may want to correct. In about the 10th paragraph:

Abigail strode towards Armitage with Victoria in her wake, hardly noticing the students **doding** aside as she crossed the floor.

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