by Myhands316
Part of me likes the story but the main character really grates on my nerves for being so... Grumpy, slow, etc. I finished reading it because I hate leaving a story undone but it was, annoying, for lack of a better term.
Great story. Loved the stuff James kept grumbling. That kind of grumpiness and mind wandering is pretty normal when one is frightened and not wanting to show it. Good writing, but editing instead of just spell check is needed. Fortunately only a couple of times words like now and not in the wrong place and had to reread the sentence to make sense. All in all a very good read.
Hell, I wish I could give it 100 stars! This story was awesome! I can't wait for more!
Please continue this story for a long time.
And Yes, I gave it 5 Stars.
Ramjet
I love the idea that an author can poke fun at sci fi writers in a fantastic treatise on sci fi .
now all we need is the next chapter.
I am not usually a sci-fi kind of reader. I don't know why I even read this story, BUT I am glad that I did. I enjoyed the story, the humor was outstanding and I even liked the grumpy old guy. Thank you for a very entertaining and interesting story.