All Comments on 'Across The Road'

by jack_straw

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Poor

Poor ending,he couldn't connect with anyone then all of a sudden when Sam moves away he meets someone ,then next thing he is married.Also what happened to his children?.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
cradle snatcher

a so so story...nothing dynamic

daluentdaluentalmost 17 years ago
Excellent!!!

Jack you are the best writer of sex scenes I have ever read on lite. Is it because of your orientation or what? I don't even touch myself and I'm ready to shoot. Anyway this story was awesome. With very high regards, Luis

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Words for the ages:

it sure was fun while it lasted!

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Sounds like those college boys must have had a bit of a complex trying to make her happy.

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Alls well that ends well.

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Regards, Jack

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A Story Teller - Again

Your experience and talent are evident in this effort.<P>

When you choose a subject matter with significant character respect as a prime factor you always hit a 4basebagger.<P>

I wonder when some other good writers will understand that<P>

You Author are primo entertainment and very much worth the read.<P>

Thanks - With Very High Regard

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