All Comments on 'Across Town'

Excellent work from the female perspective. Very arousing. More please!

Great first story -well done

Great horny sexy story, i do hope that there are more to come please?

Great story great storytelling. Very hot piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

Superb story. Well written and created. A dream come true.

Thank you

Sexy fun romp. Hope you write more.

Great writing!! Very sexy. Keep it up.

Utterly brilliant, a lovely dirty story and beautifully crafted. So authentic that I could imagine it’s based on real experience. Definitely more please, you have a real gift for erotica.

Delightful set up, with a clear sketch of a woman's life and how it could be too routine.

A great story about a sexually deprived woman and group sex. The college gang bang scene has been done many times but it still resonates when told as vividly as this one. A wonderful start. I'm hooked as your follower.

Ms. Louisville, you are an excellent writer. Perfect in fact. A toast to you for the opportunity to peruse your work.

good for you!

Very good story ! 😊

At the end, there should be 10 stars allowed. This was a fabulously put together story for a first timer !!!!! As a writer, no here, but published, you had me wondering, how a first could be this good, but it was. Just a sense that this was not all imagination, but contained some history, because it almost seemed too good, unless it actually happened OB76?!!!? Encore, Encore, Encore !!!!

damned fine story ... we will want MORE

How many women want younger men to take them as sex slaves or fuck toys? Nobody has to admit this, just know it could happen if you know what the guy acts like.