All Comments on 'Activated Pt. 21'

by The_Architect

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janus48janus483 months ago

I'm so grateful for your writing. This a great fun upbeat story. Thank you I wait expectantlly for yor next chapter!

Xzy89c1Xzy89c12 months ago

Very slow. Variation on themes at this point. Nothing progressing as far as plot.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c12 months ago

So slow. What is point of Rebecca? When will plot move forward?

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