All Comments on 'Adam'

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ballznall60ballznall60almost 8 years ago
Beautifully written!

Five stars! As an aging bisexual, I can relate to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent and realistic

It was a pleasure, literally, to read a story where everyone did not have rock-hard abs and a rock-hard penis that never quit. Most of us don't now, and those who do, won't have them forever.

aithonaithonover 3 years ago
a well-crafted realistic story of longing

Thank you for writing and publishing such a great story. Your narrator is a sensitive and believable character; it is entirely appropriate that he takes such a trip. The slow building of the narrative is a pleasure, and the love-scene between the narrator and Adam is sexy and fine. Reading this made my morning.

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