by chris99999
You are going to continue this, yes? You have my interest pegged on if he gets lucky with the aunt and sister.
Looking forward to your next chapter with Aunty June and later with sister Ava.
There will be one, right? Right? Gotta find out how Aunt June gets seduced. Then sister Ava. Wow. Can't wait.
Your story feels rushed. You write it without much description and just give pure facts. I didn't manage to get sucked in the story. You need more description to imerge us into your story.
Moreover the sex scenes are way too short and they lack teasing. You have to have us anticipate the sex scene and then deliver a hot sex scene longer than 5 sentences.
I feel like we've read this before! Your take on someone elses idea maybe? That's not a bad thing. Theres very few original ideas out there.
Very entertaining read. Looking forward to future Chapters. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed this story and I am looking foreword to chapters two and three, being Aunt June and sister Ava.
Thanks for reading my story and for all your comments.
The idea of not being able to use your hands is not a new one, however apart from that this story is 100% original. It's a result of my dirty mind and vivid imagination.
There's nothing quite like a mother's loving touch, eh? I'm in my 70s, and I still remember with fondness "bath time" with Mommy when I was a young-un..... ;-)
Looking forward to chapters with Aunty & Sis! Thanks for this one!
You so write a good story line and I have seen the same in other stories you have written. Keep writing more, you have a good writing style.
Can't wait for pt.2 and pt.3, hope there as hot as pt.1 . Good read.....THANKS
I have to say I actually couldn't do things for myself and family a friends had with normal things and a lot more. I was asked by friend to go by a few golf club to fix lights on 17 & 18 holes. It was around 3pm,cloudy June 14th, I climbed the tree where lights were and a junction box, I woke up in an ambulance smelling burnt hair try to move I black out again I woke again in the hospital my wife and my mother in law and daughters were there I was strapped to the bed. I was wrapped up like a mummy only my nostrils opened and a slit for my mouth. I was hit by lightning I had first degree burns on top of my body, all the hair burned off all of my body a 3rd degree burn on my arm. It was really bad sun burn but near 2nd degree, they gave me choice that I could stay at the hospital or go home my wife could help me with taking a bath use a brush in the shower twice a day for 6 weeks and put an ointment (silvadene), my aunt worked with her husband at a drugs store my wife bought 2 cases of gauge and 2 case silvadene. I bled and in pain all the time I tried not thinking about it. Yes it hurt like hell, but I was naked all the time I was barely sleeping after a few days I being nude in front of everyone didn't phase me at all. I I was bald over my entire body before it became a fade have a catheter which made bleed couldn't do hardly anything with my hands moving hurt and I was told to drink lots of water. The catheter was very painful my urinary channel was small and it took time a lots lube get it in and bled it hurt really bad when my dick got hard and bled more after 5 days after a few calls to the Dr we removed it now my daughters were more interested in in nursing me back to health they were 18 and 17, I was the talk of the time. We only knew about 5 of our neighbors but after 2 weeks (my wife kept count neighbors all were females except for 1 male, but all of my relatives had came by a few times the women that fact that upper half was wrapped up mummy looking and couldn't see anyone. I was had to calm down my daughters about where to clean and how long I learned years later that they had some of their girlfriends over looking at me. I was mystery to many that had been hit by lightning. My aunt was a naughty woman she took liberties with her nursing which was very happy with. There lots things you learn after your children are adults, the fact I nude for over six weeks being ushered to to the toilet having your penis held and having your butt wiped and washed. Having the hell teased out of you. I also found out that my dick had been measured and held by a few neighbors and your daughters aided in all and it was harmless more out curiosity. It the kinky neighbors and relatives that got their kinks on.
One down, two to go.... Looking forward to his stay with Aunty June to see just how she handles her nephew with the large dick. Glad his Mom finally came around to letting him fuck her, it was nice, just what about every son wishes for.