All Comments on 'Added Heat Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Two is company and any more is ....

There are so many more erotic possibilities with just the mother and son on their own.

Why do you feel the need to bring the son's friends along as well?

mexbearlllmexbearlllover 10 years ago
GREAT START

can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Every Boys Wet Dream

What a predicament and oh the possibilities for future storyline directions.

Good start and a variation on just the mother/son angle, could be looking at some raunchy multi-action screwing based on the hot facial and blow jobs so far.

Keep it up, can't wait for the next installment.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 10 years ago
Was hot

Was hot till having them cum on her face that blew the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a very well done story, but...

I agree with the last anon. Frankly, a mother's cunt is for her own boy, just like the boy's big hard cock is for his mom. That's where the love is, no need for outsiders who just want to get their rocks off. A fit healthy boy's got enough semen in his hot young balls to keep his mommy happy and satisfied.

Sex4LfSex4Lfover 10 years ago
great start but........

Very hot and a great start to the story but is the author going to finish it or is this going to be another one and done like so many others? Only time will tell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OK Story...

...but the writing is appalling! You're what, 14?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good work

Keep it up. Don't make us wait too long again for the next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great so far.

Im loving this. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love it so far, bring on part 2 and include more facials for the mother

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awesome

loved it please write more.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great read!

Hope your story line continues.

longshot954longshot954over 10 years ago
anticipation

Can't wait for the next installment!

William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Glad you're back

And you are on the right track for sure!

This Mom is a 5 star attraction.

The kind every boy dreams about.

csltcsltover 3 years ago
Love your stories!

Thanks!

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