by JoeDreamer
Good writing. Fun story. Clever dialog. Hard to believe that you have so many readers that read these fictional stories as if they were the real thing, with real people. I guess that’s a testament to your writing skills. They comment about characters as if they had really cheated and lied and broken their spouses heart. I hate to burst your bubble folks, but it didn’t happen. No rabbits were hurt in the testing of this product. Sheesh ! How f’ing dumb can you be ??
Another smiling 5. 😊Thanks !!
No addiction is anything to be proud about. This is just tomorrow female dogs running around loose. Nothing of value. Main character is good, but all that good is wasted. Doesn't matter if you spin it as fun or some stupid women's needs, or just sex, or sharing. It's just infidelity and adultery.
A slut loves sex. When she is good at it, it is difficult to resist her even when you know she's a slut.
Most exes are exes for good or at least adequate reasons and we mostly don't want their return. Some return, reunite, and split again repeatedly. Is that a fetish?
Whenever Brenda's husband was away, working, Brenda spent several nights with me. Karen didn't want to have anything to do with me after we broke up until I started dating other women. The same could be said about Flo. And Gwen went back and forth between her first husband and me. Then Sandy sought my bed every time her husband left town on a job. If it wasn't for ex-sex, I would have very little sex at all.
She's also his ex-wife for a reason. Find some different pussy and never talk to the bitch again. How stupid can one man be? This was just awful.
This is sad and pathetic, I want to like the story but can't even get myself to like the characters dude needs to get some therapy and treatment before he ends up with an STD. Not one of your better works.
Absolute SCUM of a threesome they are.
The husbands of the cheating cunt sisters needs to divorce their slutty arses,
need to beat the fuck out of the douchebag.
Then the three of them screw each other all they want and bring other male and female sluts in until they are dripping with diseases.
Dirtbags.
and he is letting little dick control him....I loathe and detest cheating fuck slut whores.....they should be in the gutter where they belong or...better still...put a bullet between their eyes.....
Seriously great story sexy as hell hopping for a part three some time soon
LOL, you gotta love this story. He almost says" oh well, here I go again..."
Just kidding.
Don't you just love it when people come onto porn sites looking for moral role models and a pulpit from which to castigate the Sinning Masses?
Holy Crap, they're a hoot.
This was sort of a fun story, I thought. Not exactly my favorite kind of tale, but a good read nonetheless.
Good prose, easy read, as befits the third place finisher of this year's Valentine's Day contest. That's the good part. The bad part is that these people are amoral. They're self-centered, greedy and without conscience. Why would I, or anyone, for that matter, care what happens to them?
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If there was a plot, I'm not sure what it is. The only conflict in the story that I could find was the main character being unhappy when he discovers he's been fucking around with married women. It doesn't make for much of a plot.
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Is there any character development to the story? None that I could find. Denise, Lori and the narrator are still the same amoral people at the end of the story as they were at the beginning. Maybe this is supposed to be a stroke story?
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The main character laments, "For better or worse, I'm addicted to my ex-wife." If that's so, here's something I learned when I quit smoking cigarettes: a good way to quit is <I>to stop buying them</I>. A good way to break the addiction to skanky whores is <I>to stop seeing them</I>. It's called not thinking with your dick.
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This is better than a twenty-five but not a lot better. I thank you for your effort.
I took this story as a tongue-in-cheek fantasy and hence found it erotic and amusing. I don't usually like slut stories, but somehow this one works.
This story is nothing more than cuckoldry by fiat. There ought to be a category just for that.
I have reviewed this story in the New Story Reviews on the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums.
Slutty women are great, you just don't fall in love or marry them.
when the guy walks out to say good bye to the two whores from hell... No readers cares what he will or will not do with them next time.
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hey if this guy wants to fuck these two whores thats is His business but dont go compaining to me or your local bar tender when you find these two whores are now cheating on you....