All Comments on 'Addy's First Night'

Very good story. please continue it. No sharing her with his friends, abusive language toward her and certainly no bondage crap. just keep it a good ole fashion love story

Great story. Keep the love in the story and develop chapter 2.

I really enjoyed this story, I think and hope you write more chapters of tho story.

it has great potential to be a cracking series!

I loved it!

Really awesome story. As previous comments stated, the direction is nice! Keep it up!

.... and then turned into yet just another fucking "daddy" - "baby girl" lame story with unreal dialogue.

This is such a popular theme and perhaps for that reason it has been rendered a thousand times and yet you have managed to bring a freshness to the telling of it. You have a wonderful gift for word craft: "He saw her for perhaps, what she didn't." What a marvelous turn of a phrase. You have such talent. I applaud you and your story.

love it want more please

more please, great start, well written , let them take it further

Lucas need to get his dear daughter pregnant with at lease 12 babies minimum. Addy should be barefoot, naked, pregnant for the next 20yrs.

Daddy likes! Nice build up and believable interactions.

no more???? cmon man this is the good stuff!!

Please do more on this!

How did things progress? How did he "take care of things" with the mom & ex? All the options to take here... do they get the house done, and mom shows up at the door, trying to win her back, because the ex decided she was too old, and didn't want to take responsibility for the baby? Does Addy end up pregnant, before mom shows up?

Story is like 4 years old m8. Lol

One logistical note:

I’m 6’3 and I lost my cherry to my first college GF who was 5’1. Later, I saw the error of my ways and dated mostly tall women.

When a tall man fucks a woman a foot shorter (missionary style) her head is in the middle of his chest, at best.

Other than that, this was a perfectly predictable xerox of every other daddy/daughter story ever written.