All Comments on 'Adeeana's Mate Ch. 02'

by tis_mina

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sblazer227sblazer227about 16 years ago
pls continue

i would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The suspense.

The suspense card was well played. I can't wait to get to the next chapter! ...I just think you should have wrote more on why Adeeana suddenly was all over Sheron. She was just fighting him the night before. Then suddenly she's kissing on him the next morning? ...share her epiphany. It was great though!

-Jaz

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