All Comments on 'Administrative Discipline'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Come on Guys!

No not the author but, you the reader. This is a very good story. Well writen with a wonderful twist. A twist that was so subtle that it took me a few sentences to recognize. All that and I am the only one to comment. I am ashamed of the other readers who perhaps were to dense to get the twist.

Now for the author. Darn you, now I will have to read all of your other works. Thank you

Mike S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
indeed -- come on, guys! give this story some more 5s.

Cute plot twist, delicious D&S -- it's all there.

BlaqueMousemanBlaqueMousemanover 10 years ago
One of the Best!

Love the story twist at the end!

Well written and a joy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Disappointing

And STAUNCH does not mean STANCH.

"Staunch is an adjective meaning “ardent and faithful” Stanch is a verb meaning “to stop the flow”; it is almost always used in. regard to bleeding, literally and metaphorically. AP Stylebook. stanch, staunch."

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What, this guy is still alive? Sorry, yes, still kicking. I've got so much work in process I don't know what to work on. Help me out! Y'all get a notification when I update this thing, so tell me what you want! You just might get it. Maybe. No promises. And no weird ...