All Comments on 'Adonis'

I am in love with all of your stories! This one was fantastic! Keep up the good work :)

You have done it again, great story....loved the guys

You have done it again! I so love your writing and it just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to read what you write next.

Dull, repetitious, thoroughly formulaic. You can do better.

Although this is much less than the "stories" we are used to seeing from you, it is still wonderful. Different because there isn't the background, but not enough to say it isn't fantastic in it's own right. Congrats!

If this work of art is dull and formulaic, all I dare to ask for is that half of the authors on this site be so predictable... Besides, some of the world's greatest authors were predictable, but what made them great was the form and quality of their work... Well done. I have'nt read any lit pertaining marital fantasies explored that were as good as this. Ever...

So bravo to your ' formulaity'. It's the best I've come across for a while

I hope you write Greg's fantasy next. Love your stories. Was about half way trough and I was thinking, I bet they know each other!! But it was still a wonderful love story.

As always, loved it. The little twist at the end was a welcomed surprise. Perhaps you could write the other fantasy from Greg's perspective? Keep writing so I can keep reading!

A very descriptive and well written story. Good luck in the contest.

This story is so hot and the loving ending makes it even hotter!!!

A grand romantic story with a nice twist.

Ok you had me going for awhile. It seemed just toooo easy and then all the way with a stranger? But then the cherry on top....married and playing out fantasy-how perfect. Love it!

I AM WITH THE POST BELOW. IT SEEMED AWFULLY DANGEROUS AND FOOLISH AS IT PROGRESSED TO GO BAREBACKING IN A FANTACY WORLD. AND, YET, THE CONCLUSION WAS ABSOLUTELY GREAT.

WONDERFUL STORY WITH A FABULOUS CONCLUSION.

MACK

I thought your vocabulary was so-so over the top.

I started reading this story and was wondering where it was going, you totally surprised me and that was great, to think they are married!! did not see that coming, you really are good and i enjoyed reading this story a lot!!!

I loved this story. More please.

Your story was plagiarised by http://rioescandela.livejournal.com/

Please leave your story up so the admins at http://stop-plagiarism.livejournal.com/ can make a case and have evidence and he get the punishment.

As soon as they said, 'I love you.' I knew there was going to be a twist. Loved this a lot.

As always, wonderful reading!

Simply a great tale. And I was totally taken in by the surprise. Had no idea they would end up already a married couple. Great sex. Would like more but see that you have quit posting long ago. Our loss. cp