All Comments on 'Adrian then Mae'

First, Adrian does not know. Second, if he cares, he needs to help her to find a job and an apt so he can see if they can be an item--much better way to spend his $1000's. Third, no concern for STD, not even a passing thought? Still, I like this story.

yes, very much so. Five stars for originality, quality and fantasy. It's nice to escape sometimes. Take care...

You have a different way of presenting your characters. This is the third of your stories that I have read and in each the characters seem to be tragically flawed. And yet, they have an almost pathetic charisma, like an abandoned puppy.