by SteveWallace
This was very nice. Is it a one off or will you be continuing the story?
Glad you are writing again. I've read all your stories on this site multiple times. Not sure which series is my favorite because I enjoyed them all. Am looking forward to the next chapter of this story and to see where you take us on this ride!
This is a wonderful start to a great adventure. Thank you for bringing me with you.
The concept is interesting, though it hardly fits the incest category. Too much of the dialogue, though, is contrived, with rather silly language to describe body parts, excretions and the like.
Great start! And I'm very curious where this will be going. Keep up the good work!
Wonderful opening Chapter, very nicely written and i'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you 5 stars.
Father and son sharing sisters way cool!
Great start! I am already hooked on this series. Looking forward to reading the next chapters. Great characters and situations and hot sex who could ask for anything more. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
You're one heck of a creative author. And your style is easy to read.
On to the next chapter!
Love the story and the story line. I’m thinking Ross and Dave’s middle name is “Lucky” 😊
Not reading any further
Anyone who can’t make her mind up between a father and son is a slut who needs counseling.