All Comments on 'Adulterous Honeymoon'

It took me three days to read this, I enjoyed every minute, thanks for a fantastic story ,,

... should not be so easy! It is amazing how well you made each little step seem so easy and setting up the next step. Excellent job. Probably would have been an easier read if each day had been its own chapter (took me over 1 week to read from end to end), but all in all very well done. Absolutely loved it! Looking forward to reading more of your material.

I really enjoyed this story, and I was hard for most of the chapters.

Thanks for a very good read!

Joe

I about flogged my cock off reading this story. Nice buildup. 5*

great story, well written, but so long in detail

Amazing story. Very well written. I always like stories of an innocent wife gets seduced. I believe the journey to sex is as interesting, if not more so, as the sex itself. Thank you for giving me the reader so much pleasure.

You are an excellent writer. Your description of the emotional and gradual development is very good. An exciting story well told.

I take the husbands view in these stories. I understand his enjoyment of the wifes gradually overcoming inhibitions, opening up to new pleasures and discovering her sensuality. I totally understand his loving of watching her extreme pleasure. This is so well described in this well written and exciting story.

But I would be grossed out by her eating faeces from her lovers penis, the lover peeing in her mouth. And I would never encourage a situation where she would be filmed and photographed by strangers. Big risk of this documentation winding up on the internet. Do she really want aunt Agatha to find out what happened in Belize?

Some of us search stories by phrases we like. When you get several phrases all in one story - you check it out. But a 25 page story is like the author telling you - ok have fun I dare you to find it!! How sweet. And your lack of paragraphs even makes reading difficult. This might be a fine story but I think the author has virtually no consideration for the reader and makes it most difficult to read.

This story unfolded slowly and kept me interested all the way. Thanks.

As well written, and thought out, story as I have read online or in magazine format.

very bloody good. 6 stars

Glad to give this pile of garbage the 1*** it deserved....

I loved this story. I was very similar to how my beautiful wife and I evolved into our relationship. We went through many of the same adventures and in time we discovered just how much of an exhibitionist my wife is. Now all of our vacations center around where and how we can show her off and possibly get some strange cock.

25 pages of crap......

The initial story line was a hot idea, but then it went completely off the rails! Too long of a build up to a poorly written "climax"!

The story after that just dragged on into the depths of stupidity! I would imagine in real life you are a person who likes to hear himself talk?

This was indeed a novella and while very erotic, there were a few things that were a turn off for me. Example: oral sex after anal and drinking urine or being urinated on. I did like the sex and again it was arousing, but some little things bothered me. 1. That it wasn't proofed better. Incorrect words were used or that he would be fondling her left breast only to move to the left breast, things like that. I do think the concept was good for a story but we were told Bob worked building boats yet he never went to work. I do look forward to reading more stories from this person, perhaps the next will be even better.

Sheesh ! This story went from a 5 because the first few trysts with Bob were fun, to a 4 when virtually the same thing happened every day, to a (generous) 3 after she sucked his cock after being ass fucked. Seriously ??? Could have been a great story if not for its interminable length. Who goes on honeymoon for a month? Where was the much needed editing? Very distracting with missing words, extra words, etc. you do like to hear yourself talk. I've read other stories by you and they were terrific. This must be an early attempt. Not your best work. Less analysis works. You do get better with other stories.

could actually see most of that happening on a honeymoon. however, sleeping with bob on Monday & Tuesday was bad enough.spending but, the 3rd night was over the top. i realize that she wanted to be convinced, but enough is enough. on top of that, thr BJ at the airport was overkill.

1* for this garbage. People like this creep me out. Disgusting.

A real shame this is 25 pages - and not 25 chapters. For those of us who search by phrases = this one catches all! Poorly formatted too - missing paragraph breaks - sentences that run on and on -- too much effort to read after first few pages.

Another story ruined. This isn't even adultery, it's just cuck crap. If it had been about the husband showing her off and her moral erosion it might have been good. Instead we get kitchen sink fetishism and cuck crap just like a million other stories on here.

As a side note, it's obvious that pubic hair fetishists know they're deviant and gross. They spend way too much time trying to explain why "real men love bush" when the truth is that it's gross. If it was normal or natural you wouldn't need to defend it or go on and on about it.

I liked the story but it needed more twists, some angst, depression, character development, some nail biting. Overall, good plot, just needs tweaking with some imagination. Husband was too damn lame.

This was a well written story. Few of this length can hold attention. I did find the encounters pretty repetitive in the last several pages. I liked the cuckold aspect of it, but it seemed pretty unlikely that the medical situation would have lasted a month and without any ill effects from Alan's excitement. With Alan's desires regarding licking cum, I expected him to at some point guide Bob into his wife, fuck lick his wife and Bob, or clean Bob.

Well I can't believe that any sane man would allow his virgin bride to be taken by another man much less a stranger. And for him to encourage such behavior is just sick. If this marriage didn't end up in divorce it would be a miracle.

Any reader who would wade through 25-pages of drivel has a bigger psychosis than the "university professor" who wrote it. Yes, you're a tenured professor and I'm a retired nave SEAL married to a former Miss Sweden Universe. Seriously, OP needs some couch time. Seriously, this is Lex Luthor level misappropriation of talent.

25 pages?

Just finished page 1, I'll keep reading to see how it goes. I refuse to read other comments until I finish the story. So far so good.

The story is long and the development is maddeningly slow until the dam bursts and the wife finally commits adultery/loses her cherry. After that, she fucks with abandon. This author has a good writing style. His fetish sucking cocks after anal sex--which is over emphasized. The wife is the narrator but says little of the effect of the sexual awakening on her heart and desires. She just reacts to the initiative others and relies upon the husband for deviant ideas. I stayed with the story waiting for an alarming twist. They didn't happen. I would like to read more about this woman. Here are some twists that could have been worked: the wife could have asked to be shared along the beach in a mad last week marathon to fuck 100 men before her husband was able to fuck her--what if she came up shy of the one hundred? Then she could have had to find the remainder in her home town and that would notify the town of her lust for sex; the wife could have decided to stay in Belize with her first man; the wife could have handed off to other men so she could stay in Belize indefinitely; upon return to the doctor, the husband could have learned that he would never be able to have an erection and the couple would have to find the wife lovers to satisfy her needs, lusts, and perversions; the wife could have demanded lovers when she got home; the wife and her lovers could return to Belize regularly for successive sex-filled getaways; and, the wife could have gotten pregnant by her lover after all. The twists are endless.

I read a while, but the monolithic paragraphs and wordy commentary got me around page five. You badly need an editor. This plot doesn't merit 25 pages. No rating because I didn't read it.