All Comments on 'Adventures with Erin Pt. 02'

You just started with the brother. Leave the father out unless he is just a voyeur.

leave dad out of it please

Why can't peoplel leave love and passion be and not always include the parents? Sure it was sweet to see love blossom and the hopes of more emerged only to be stomped on by lame dad who had a thing for his daughter......if only you'd let be at vouyerism to spice the story and meye drive some passion into their marriage instead. Oh well, it was fun while it lasted, at least I hope that sis is still only playing.

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Like others before me said, you totally lost me when Dad came in the picture. I mean, it seemed to me that brother and sister had special feelings for each other not simple lust. So bringing the father in the equation just makes it all wrong. And admittedly he's a bit creepy.

Please stop subsequent instalments on this story.

Even though it (hopefully) is a fantasy, everything was spoiled with dad entering the story line. Not nice.

auto dump and a 1 star