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All Comments on 'Aelia in the Kingdom of Farran Ch. 01'

by Nayeli

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Yes

Like it a lot! Writing is excellent. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This could become really good,

but PLEASE don't produce yet another story that consists primarily of slavery and rape. There are too many of those in the SciFi & Fantasy category anyway :-(

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
An Excellent Beginning!

I hope that it just gets better from here, as Prince Rowald domesticates Aelia, making of her an delightful pleasure slave.

I wish you well.

bemcbemcover 14 years ago
great buildup

Climnbing, sex, history... what a great intro! I can't wait to read more. Keep them coming.

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