All Comments on 'Aelia in the Kingdom of Farran Ch. 04'

So glad you updated this story. I hope you are able to update more often.

It certainly has taken some unexpected turns while leaving the initial questions unanswered. I trust at some point you'll get back to the detail of how she got to this world in the first place.

It does seem almost trite how the Prince seems the only enlightened man in his kingdom. For such a patriarchal society there must be someone from whom he has learned that women are more than pleasure chalices or mothers. I think for this story to continue to work, that little annoying detail may have to be explored some.

the previous chapters by the time this one came along.

One typo I noticed: "so she preferred to thread lightly"...pretty sure that should be "tread lightly". Didn't keep me from giving it five stars, though. :)

Did Rowald know about the agreement between his father and Lord Blair? Was it a written agreement? I wonder if Lord Blair had some part in the original attack by Syrta in order to force the marriage. He may have his own plans that depend upon his daughter becoming queen of Farran. I can't stand to wait for more!

Please give us the next chapter!!!!!!! An extra long one would be faaabulous :)

This was absolutely fantastic. I hope you continue the series. :)

I check all the time but alas nothing. It is a wonderful story.

I absolutely loved this story and have been waiting seriously long for an update. If you have decided to not finish it, maybe it would be an idea of taking it down...

I like your writing style and the mood you set. I hope you continue to write.

Please finish this its an amazing piece.

I know it's not likely after so long but I'd love for you to finish this. Great story.

Another great story, abruptly ended, hope to see more, very good story

Please finish this.