All Comments on 'AERIE: Book 01 Part 01'

I love the originality and the whole idea of this, the execution was excellent and the description of the “imprinting” was great, I’d have liked it longer, but then most people want a bigger piece of pie than is available. Eagle-y waiting for the next part (see what I did there? ;-) )

P.S. 5* all day long. Thanks muchly for writing and submitting Rollinbones.

Love it! So different yet touching and loving. It just brightened up my evening once I started reading it. Can't wait for them to take the next step and go through the portal. Sorry that I can only give this five stars, as it's worth much more. Thanks

This is a wonderful first chapter. I can’t wait to read the next one. Thanks

@ Purplefizz

Eagle-y waiting?

LOL

Love it!

Love the story too, so refreshing to read some different, high quality work.

Thanks, Rollinbones!

Your creativity and imagination are incredible and to be able to put it into words so perfectly, it is beautiful. You manage to give the characters a depth and emotion that is somewhat uncommon to many of the stories I have read it then very few of them have this level of originality. It is unsettling (which might be the wrong word but it is what popped into my head) but in a good way to be able to see the creation of something so new to me and unlike things I have read in the past. It does becoming confusing at times but I feel that it helps the story along as it somewhat puts you into the confused mindset of the characters. I have loved this so far and hope you continue to create at this level in the future. I will be one of the many who await your next piece of this story and truly look forward to it. Thanks for this story, it is a real gem.

Be well and stay safe.

J.D.

I loved it when she gave him an egg! Such a lady thing that we want to lure our man back to the nest... tehehe! Nice!

Hi fellow Qlder. Loved the hint on the back of the wrestling jacket. I suffer from aussie cringe usually, so I don't really associate quality fiction, certainly not of this level, with my brethren from home. Thank you for a great story. So wildly original. Looking forward to more. Danny, Brisbane. aussie62@outlook.com