All Comments on 'Affair of the Body 01'

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rml65rml65over 7 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing your story!

TheOriginalAnonymousTheOriginalAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hell of a start...

Great story so far, can't wait for future installments.

Intrigued by the title; I hope that after another chapter (or however many it takes), you create a second series in the saga called "Affair of the Heart" wherein their physical relationship becomes an emotional one as well.

HypeBeastHypeBeastover 7 years ago

A series is seriously needed. Wonderful start, can't wait to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I am totally intrigued so just let the naughtiness begin. Am so looking forward to the next installment.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
very good

I really liked they way she though it was one thing and it was totally different, can't wait for more good first chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice red herring

Assumptions, we all make them, and embarrassment we've all been there. throw those tow together and you made a great beginning for a beautiful friendship . .

massagetherapymassagetherapyover 7 years ago
Lovely start

Wonderful story line in this 1st chapter. Hints, teases, innuendo... all adult in thought and action... it seemed "natural"... Can't wait to read the rest!

BelindaTvDKBelindaTvDKabout 2 years ago

WOW... Damn nice beginning...

Being late, this night, before sleep, lol

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