All Comments on 'Affair with my Father-in-Law'

just ok

it just needs more details

We have 4 years of fucking

This story was very hot. I very much enjoyed the background and how all the elements worked, but I think there was too much repetition about how her husband was working too much and how their love life petered out. More detail and emphasis could have been added about her childhood and why she craved affection from her father-in-law. It was easy to see, but it could have born more explanation. More explanation of the mother-in-law could have been there, too. The final scene was well-written, though more from the father-in-law's perspective and his feelings could have built up int he declaration of love at the end. It was a good story with much potential. I want to see more.

It cut off after one fuck and they have been at it for 4 years... Need more please so much more.

Pls do write stuff like this or continue this as a series.

That was very erotic ! I liked it alot ! You must continue the saga. You'd said they'd been having the affair for 4 years. It can only get better ?