All Comments on 'African Encounter'

Unbelievably hot. I am waiting for my "Mike" to show up someday...

Thanks for a wonderful story...be sure to keep writing!

This is a good story, but Why, Why, Why the careless shift between the past and the present tense in the middle of the story?

Pick one tense and stay with it. Other than that, the story was quite hot and nicely descriptive. Good job except for that one thing!