All Comments on 'After Dad: Mom and Son in Love'

a slow burner but built to a great end

This story is very well written.

I didn't like the way it ended. If two individuals really loved one and other, why would they leave that relationship?

I don't think the write gave the mother's age but the natural progression of things.....I would have given my mother our baby. A baby and hopefully a few more babies.

Loved this story! Well written to express both emotional and physical attraction/need and the love that blossomed from it. Look forward to more from you!!!

beautifully written. just the right amount of buildup

possibly the best i have ever read

Wow - that was really good.

This waa really good. It draws the reader in, and the build-up keeps you there. It was wrutten too.

5 stars

It was great, until the end came. Couldn't take the separation kindly.

Fantastic!!!

Thank you all kindly for the comments. Keeps me motivated to keep writing.

As to the ending... I won't say too much why I chose to close off the story this way. But to me, it couldn't have ended any other way.

Very nice story. Thank You

Damn, this was a fantastic story. Really well written. Congrats!

Have to support my favorite author when he opts for more a serious tone.

5 stars from me and welcome back DD.

One of the most well crafted stories I have ever read. The feeling of grief and the sensitive treatment expressed in words are simply marvelous. The language is so evocative that it needs a special mention. Thank you for writing such a story. You raised the bar high up there!

Hi this was a grate story, Keep them coming, as you got me going big time. My name is Lofty I'm 78 and still get very hard thank you xxxx ..

It was OK, too much GRIEF for me.

Sure wish my mom had given me her panties instead of hiding them from me. If only she had been willing to explore our relationship, I could've would've given her the TLC she craved, needed & wanted.

This was so beautifully written, and in a way that seemed right and real for a grieving mother and son. I love how slowly they fell deeper in love with each other, and that you didn't rush their intimacy considering how huge the stakes were. Bravo to you!

A well written story, although I would have liked it better if they had moved away together and continued to make love to each other.

Very intense and beautiful. As close as they got it would seem that they can’t stay apart. I would think that they would move away from all people that they know and have a son named after the deceased father.

Just perfect. I would think that after being apart they found that they could live without each other. I think they would move to where no one knew them and have a son that they would name after the deceased father.

Ugh

Quit reading

No

oh please write another chapter. mom and son need to sell dad's house, move to another state and live as husband and wife to share all their love they have for each other. this story deserves a happier ending where everyone gets to show their love for each other, instead of mom, more or less going to nightly crocheting classes as she slowly dies away without the love of her life, just so sad..

There isn't enough pregnancy in your stories.

For a son to love his mother and care about her, this story hits home. I never was this close to my mother. Your mother was a redhead and freckled. That is nice, I like red hair. My mother was a brunette. There was not too much details regarding the sex. You gave enough to tell us you did love pleasing her. I expected you would move on. The healing was done so the intimacy was done. The panties on the pillow did hint she wanted you to taste her.

Bruce

Didn't like the ending at all. They deserved to be together forever. Still a decent story compared to your other stories, and frankly I have found most of your stories to be not much enjoyable. 2*

This was a grate story. thank you very Mutch.

Liked the story but after their first sex together you skipped more sexual acts out!! And all that crap of taking forever to get over the death of a love one was a bit much gave it a 4

Fucking shit, could kept going instead of stopping

good story, I love how they slowly make love for each other but after the first sx the story kinda rushed and the ending for me is meh fr. hope you write the part 2 of this story