All Comments on 'After Dark on Step-Dad's Lap'

Great story! Can't wait to hear more

It'll be really hot if he got her pregnant. While she was trying to be sneaky. 🔥

Would have been a little better if he had let her know he was awake while she was straddling him!

will you continue? please do

That's one hell of a start for a first story! You sir, are bookmarked. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Any guy that could stay quiet and not participate in that show is unnatural.

Loved this - brilliant first story. The timing for me was perfect- the right amount of build up and anticipation. There are just a few editing issues with past/present tense and some minor grammatical mistakes but nothing that took me out of the story/mood.

I have to say the 'no dialogue' comment made me chuckle. The guy was pretending to be asleep! What scope for dialogue is there?

I enjoyed it a lot, so thanks from me (and my very wet and freshly satisfied nether regions).

Great for your first time out ! Really enjoyed it. You should continue with this story. You certainly seem to have a knack for it..

I was totally into this hot story, sure it's pure fantasy, but a very hot one.

I was more surprised that this was a first submission, but I certainly hope, not the last.

So please submit more of your stories, either with new ones, or continue this story.

My only disappointment, was seeing, it end. Was hoping for a Chapter two,

I see from the other comments, I'm not alone, so please carry on, I can hardly wait, for more from you.

Great story! I really like the simple and concise writing.

Your story was amazing! I can't STAND bad writing and LITERALLY roll my eyes so hard it hurts every time I'm trying to read a fic and it's full of grammatical errors. But you have barely any. Idiots on here saying your story is monotonous and badly written don't know a good one when they see it. Don't listen to the negatives out there. They will purposely troll stories just to undermine and lash out because they can't write a lick if they tried. It's a FANTASY, not a biography. And it was HOT 😛

So good, I've been looking around every where for a story like this! Step dad, sleeping, no stupid dialogue, not too long and no ramblings about a whole history and back story that alot of others have. It had everything I wanted and all the languge I like (except for one word "spearing") but everything else was just perfect. I have book marked it and it'll become my new go to story.

Loved it, my pussy loved it.. and thank you for getting me off twice.

Great story

I super loved it. It got my imagination going and my pussy is sopping wet.

Fantastic, lets read the follow up !!!

Great story has my cock throbbing right now I have been dreaming of my stepdaughter doing something like this to me. She’s a 24 year old gorgeous girl who looks exactly like a younger version of her mom! I would be in heaven if this ever comes true. KJR