All Comments on 'After Finals'

by DallasJackson

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CaitExistsCaitExistsover 2 years ago

Wow, this was fantastic! This had me squirming in my seat and swallowing hard the whole way through. Would love to run into Cameron sometime! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just perfect

This is every girls erotic dream! I have read this story a few times I never tire of it! Thank you DallasJackson

CelestialDivinityCelestialDivinityabout 17 years ago
Very seductive read...

I rather enjoyed that entry. It was very erotic and seductive. Very much how I might imagine... um... you know. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent reading Jackson,,, you are a charmer,,,

Oh yes, your stories are hot,,, fire cracker hot for sure,,,,Kathleen,,, Guess who!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow

Great story....loved it....loved how nice and charming the man was....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
great!

Wow! that was hot! i loved the way you developed your characters, his sweetness was definately a plus. great story, i really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Awesome

One of the best I've ever read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A+ I thought it was great.....

Great story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Critics

I write stories also. Some better than others. I'm always amazed at the people who criticize and bitch about inanities. Your story was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
*shrug*

Not a particularly well written story, in my humble opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Believable, Sexy

I loved this story. The characters were likable and their personalities fit together well. And the guy was so charming .... :)

gdavisgdavisabout 19 years ago
Solid Story

The initial flirtation is very hot. There's a natural development to the story, as the set up is executed very well. The sex scene is also well done, although its a little bit of overkill after a while, they don't have to perform every sexual act in one night.

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