by wayzup
A well written story.
I want to know about these characters, want to hear about their relationship, but above all want to read about them fucking the shit out of each other!!
Good work.
I liked your first story, but this this one left it in the dust! Hot, sexy, awesomely erotic! Looking forward to your next story!
With a great build-up, sufficient character development, and an interesting sense of "detachment", truly an erotic story. Thanks! And more...more!
I really loved where this was going - until it hit the anal part - they were 'made for each other'.
Lukas
Loved it all. Good character development and suspense. Was it going to be a threesome? Would they say never again? Kept me wondering. How about a follow-up?
You were going along just fine until the brother went straight from his sister's ass to her pussy.