All Comments on 'After Hours Party'

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blinddogblinddogover 19 years ago
Really, Really Hot

A well written story.

I want to know about these characters, want to hear about their relationship, but above all want to read about them fucking the shit out of each other!!

Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Perfect!

I liked your first story, but this this one left it in the dust! Hot, sexy, awesomely erotic! Looking forward to your next story!

stevaroonistevarooniover 19 years ago
Very hot!

With a great build-up, sufficient character development, and an interesting sense of "detachment", truly an erotic story. Thanks! And more...more!

TesshuTesshuover 19 years ago
Above and beyond.

Excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Some party!

I really loved where this was going - until it hit the anal part - they were 'made for each other'.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story!!

Loved it all. Good character development and suspense. Was it going to be a threesome? Would they say never again? Kept me wondering. How about a follow-up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good until

You were going along just fine until the brother went straight from his sister's ass to her pussy.

bshell47bshell47over 1 year ago

Excellent Twin episode .

Please continue

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