All Comments on 'After School Rewards'

Complete and total rubbish from the first word to the last!!

conejo, you be sure not to give up the day job

The story is OK but could use more detail & fleshing out. It's better the anything the "no name" gutless wonders who made other comments could do.

I agree just flesh the story out a bit more, other than that nice job, look forward to more.

Nuff said.

I did like the story. It could definatly use a little more detail. but it is a good starting point..

Try coming up with something new. The same old "nerd/teacher" shit gets old. You need to stay inside the box and pull down the lid.

Double entendre or not the title applies to the idiots below. Certainly its not winning awards but the piece was an excellent first go, it be a shame if you didn't write anymore.

I had saved this in my "Bookmarks", so I'm not sure how many times I've read it. Regardless, I doubt I'll come back; So many spelling issues, run-on sentences other grammar problems; You give writers a bad name.

Needs part 2 second semester